September 6, 2005


Keeping a Pet: 英作訂正G以文找文

When it comes to pet, it made me remind my dog.

He always do some funny things ex: He wakes me up by his legs.

Our house had a dog, who was stry dog's baby.

For another, people often feels lonely, and hopes something can make they happily.

Third, it can company people.


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When it comes to pet, it made me remind my dog.
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Posted by 小楨楨 at 2005-09-10 18:14:10
When it comes to (pets), it (reminds me of my dog.)

He always (does) some funny things.(For example): He wakes me up by his legs.

(We) had a dog, who was stry dog's baby.

For another, people often feel lonely, and hope something can make they (happy).

Third, it can company with people.


Posted by 301--12 香菇亭 at 2005-09-10 21:48:32
香姑亭改了很多句子good
但下面的句子還有問題,同學們可再改改看

When it comes to (pets)

(For example): He wakes me up by his legs.

Third, it can company with people.
Posted by pescado at 2005-09-12 12:36:14