September 7, 2008
一、句子缺少連接詞:
① Salmons swim upstream, they leap over huge dams to reach their destination. (Bad)
② Salmons swim upstream, and then they leap over huge dams to reach their destination. (Good)
二、濫用'所有格符號
① the government's plan (Bad)
② the plan of the government (Good)
三、代名詞單/複數使用錯誤
① Everyone has their homework. (Error)
② Everyone has his (or her) homework. (Correct)
四、主/從句使用不良
① Some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over, after the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds. (Bad)
② After the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds, some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over. (Good)
五、誤用雙重否定
① Barely no one noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance. (Error)
② Barely anyone noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance. (Correct)
六、修飾句位置擺放不當
① The forest fire, no longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, jumped the firebreak. (Bad)
② No longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, the forest fire jumped the firebreak. (Good)
七、過渡使用代名詞
① The band members collected his and her uniforms. (Bad)
② The band members collected their uniforms. (Good)
八、濫用冠詞
① The project of the government reduces the costs of production of the private firms. (Crazy)
② The government project reduces the production costs of private firms. (OK)
九、忘了應該要的代名詞/名詞
① When aiming for the highest returns, and also thinking about the possible losses. (Error)
② When aiming for the highest returns, investors also should think about the possible losses.(Correct)
十、忘了斷句
① I do not recall what kind of printer it was all I remember is that it could sort, staple, and print a packet at the same time. (Bad)
② I do not recall what kind of printer it was. All I remember is that it could sort, staple, and print a packet at the same time. (Good)
僅管常常使用英文, 不過如果沒有注意, 許多錯誤的慣性, 卻如影隨形的天天出現, 滿實用, 給大家參考囉!
對我滿實用的!
① Salmons swim upstream, they leap over huge dams to reach their destination. (Bad)
② Salmons swim upstream, and then they leap over huge dams to reach their destination. (Good)
二、濫用'所有格符號
① the government's plan (Bad)
② the plan of the government (Good)
三、代名詞單/複數使用錯誤
① Everyone has their homework. (Error)
② Everyone has his (or her) homework. (Correct)
四、主/從句使用不良
① Some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over, after the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds. (Bad)
② After the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds, some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over. (Good)
五、誤用雙重否定
① Barely no one noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance. (Error)
② Barely anyone noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance. (Correct)
六、修飾句位置擺放不當
① The forest fire, no longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, jumped the firebreak. (Bad)
② No longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, the forest fire jumped the firebreak. (Good)
七、過渡使用代名詞
① The band members collected his and her uniforms. (Bad)
② The band members collected their uniforms. (Good)
八、濫用冠詞
① The project of the government reduces the costs of production of the private firms. (Crazy)
② The government project reduces the production costs of private firms. (OK)
九、忘了應該要的代名詞/名詞
① When aiming for the highest returns, and also thinking about the possible losses. (Error)
② When aiming for the highest returns, investors also should think about the possible losses.(Correct)
十、忘了斷句
① I do not recall what kind of printer it was all I remember is that it could sort, staple, and print a packet at the same time. (Bad)
② I do not recall what kind of printer it was. All I remember is that it could sort, staple, and print a packet at the same time. (Good)
僅管常常使用英文, 不過如果沒有注意, 許多錯誤的慣性, 卻如影隨形的天天出現, 滿實用, 給大家參考囉!
對我滿實用的!
